Monday, March 7, 2011

Haiku

Theme of poem: SKY


1. As time pass by now
Surrounding the earth we live
The wide blue color

2. Look up to the sky
wish for that chance to happen
believe in the grant

3. That sapphire blue
came to shine the night day long
Ever lasting gift

4. Holding that regret
Let it move up to the sky
Release from that pain

5. A sign that can post
Up on that deep navy sky
Guidance will come then

6. Opportunity
To feel that freedom so high
High up through the sky

Explanation of theme:

Sky is define as "freedom", by freedom it was meant for people to show different attitudes when looking up to the sky. Expressing themselves, with their feelings, wondering/asking about themselves, and even using post signs during war times (S.O.S). Sky is such a nice scenery, a lot of people admired it.

Their minds could get carried so high up, it makes a mind of a person feel so relaxed. It makes people happy, and make an enjoyment for themselves. It's like a burden is no longer in someone's back. By this poem I want to show people how wonderful a sky is. The existence of a sky is an extraordinary thing.

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